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Bal de Promo A1 by AzizNatour Bal de Promo A1 by AzizNatour
Client: L'Atypik (France)
Category: Advertising
Role: Design

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:iconredthepuppy:
I love it! The colors you picked work very well together! I think the shade of purple is very regal and proud looking, and that the white writing on the blackboard contrasts nicely with it. The shine coming off of the disco ball (or is it mirror ball? I can't remember...) is a little distracting, but it adds 'oomph' to the page. The geometrict shapes and pale wisps of color, besides looking cool, help to encourage analyzing the entire page, not just one little corner. I also like the font of the writing- it looks proffesional and laid-back at the same time.
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:iconcalimer00:
calimer00 Featured By Owner May 29, 2011
Great job indeed!
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:iconsuppressed-desires:
suppressed-desires Featured By Owner May 27, 2011  Hobbyist Digital Artist
It's really good. The colors suggest transition to 'complete' adulthood. It emphasizes a graduation not only from school but from being young. Like "this is the event I should go to before I graduate" kind of atmosphere. The design itself speaks transition, in my point of view. However, I think that the main event/place's name (not sure what it is exactly as I don't understand it) isn't emphasized enough. Or maybe it's just the shine of the disco ball that makes it unnoticeable at first look. Overall, I think you did an excellent job :) Keep it up. You're one of the people that makes me proud and that makes me better, seeing amazing works push me to become more driven. Thank you :)
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:iconbluedragoneye:
bluedragoneye Featured By Owner May 26, 2011  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
wow fabulous
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:iconsantiagodesigns:
santiagodesigns Featured By Owner May 25, 2011  Professional General Artist
cool
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:iconblazeuchiha18:
BLAZEUCHIHA18 Featured By Owner May 18, 2011  Student Digital Artist
cool
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:iconcaptainmexico:
CaptainMexico Featured By Owner May 6, 2011
Nice job. trčs bien!
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:icondauntlessdesigns:
DauntlessDesigns Featured By Owner May 3, 2011
Marvelous! The colors and theme fit well together. If i were to change anything i'd do something with the blank black space to the right of the robe. It isn't the black of the blackboard, and it doesn't show the gown. I needs to be lightened a bit, or filled with something else. Every other inch of the flyer is covered, it seems to be the only void.
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:iconken-nguyen:
Ken-Nguyen Featured By Owner May 3, 2011  Professional Photographer
nice...
very effective I must say.
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:iconlova85:
LoVa85 Featured By Owner May 2, 2011  Professional Interface Designer
n happy design : D
Nice
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:iconcrista-the-hedgehog:
crista-the-hedgehog Featured By Owner May 2, 2011
umm ok it nice
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:iconpuresightlau:
puresightlau Featured By Owner May 2, 2011
I'm not a critical man.but I love it bro.
It looks really awesome .
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:iconpirateloveshorses:
Pirateloveshorses Featured By Owner May 2, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
Very Nicely done ^-^
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:iconangievx:
AngieVX Featured By Owner May 2, 2011  Student General Artist
Looks cool!
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:icondkdoubleshot:
DKdoubleshot Featured By Owner May 2, 2011  Student Digital Artist
Yo THIS looks awesome it's brilliant

Wish I knew what it saying though
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:iconelune22:
elune22 Featured By Owner May 2, 2011   Photographer
nyc theme
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:iconlizzylilmonster:
LizzyLilMonster Featured By Owner May 1, 2011
Cool!!!
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:iconburkles:
burkles Featured By Owner May 1, 2011   Photographer
im going to have to agree with RedthePuppy here. the colors work amazingly well with each other adding the element of balance to the piece. the white flare behind the disco ball is a little bit to eyecatching , maybe darken it a little so its not so bright? how u set the words and fit the pieces of this together was great keep of the great work :) your going to go far if you pursue this :D
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:iconcreed-15:
creeD-15 Featured By Owner May 1, 2011
Very nice.
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:iconcreed-15:
creeD-15 Featured By Owner May 1, 2011
Very nice
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:iconmz8zone:
MZ8zone Featured By Owner Apr 30, 2011
Nice advertisement. Wacky but cool in its oun way. Great job.
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:iconlillyst:
LILLYST Featured By Owner Apr 30, 2011
so cool
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:iconmarshadesquivel:
marshaDesquivel Featured By Owner Apr 30, 2011  Professional Artist
Que ondas..!!! el arte me parece bastante bueno... muy llamativo, el contraste de colores realmente es interesante y atrae... lo que más llama la atención es la bola esa que tiene el estudiante en la mano... buenisimos efectos...
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:iconbhsgoclub:
bhsgoclub Featured By Owner Apr 30, 2011
I love the design. it is amazing
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:iconyodadude:
yodadude Featured By Owner Apr 30, 2011  Hobbyist Photographer
Nice layout.
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:iconbtmartinson:
BTMartinson Featured By Owner Apr 30, 2011  Hobbyist Photographer
I like the color scheme and the composition. A lot of good repetition and good lines.
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:iconrulklad1:
rulklad1 Featured By Owner Apr 30, 2011
the textures and font are awesome, great work!
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:iconwritingxsquirrelxftw:
WritingxSQUIRRELxFTW Featured By Owner Apr 30, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
Well, um, I don't understand French (Though, if you did something in German, I'd understand some of it), but the design's really cool.
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:iconretodesigns:
RetoDesigns Featured By Owner Apr 30, 2011
this is cool man i like it :)
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:iconwtfspiderpig:
Wtfspiderpig Featured By Owner Apr 30, 2011  Hobbyist Photographer
very cool =) nice job!
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:iconamalthea-die-wolfin:
Amalthea-Die-Wolfin Featured By Owner Apr 30, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
cool design!
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:icontonykaz1:
tonykaz1 Featured By Owner Apr 30, 2011  Hobbyist Photographer
Dude, your work is really amazing. I got the time, the cost, the day of the week, and the venue all in a second and the graphic is appropriate. I don't even need to speak french to understand it. The colors are good, not too many so probably a little less expensive to print? I think if I know who to call if I ever need to design packaging for a product.

If I knew how to add one of those smiley face guys next to me I would but I don't so I can't. I think
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:iconmrjoetodd:
mrjoetodd Featured By Owner Apr 30, 2011  Hobbyist Photographer
seriously....great work!
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:iconivan-zero09:
ivan-zero09 Featured By Owner Apr 30, 2011  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Awesome!! It´s a party?!
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:iconresonancejhons:
ResonanceJHONS Featured By Owner Apr 30, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
Perfect :B
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:icondairox:
Dairox Featured By Owner Apr 30, 2011  Student Digital Artist
Really nice work :)
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:iconfatkiddy:
fatkiddy Featured By Owner Apr 30, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
That is amazing! Great job! How do you that?!
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:iconshpunkey:
shpunkey Featured By Owner Apr 30, 2011
It looks neat :D
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:iconjbvonherb:
JBvonHerb Featured By Owner Apr 30, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
That looks like it'll be one heck of a graduation party B-)
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:iconenj0:
ENJ0 Featured By Owner Apr 30, 2011  Student General Artist
Hi Aziz,
Ok I like the perspective, the colors and lighting. The message I was not sure about. Here is the message I am receiving (remembering little French language): This seems to be indicating the day and time for a school event to occur at a disco club in France. The times etc are clear. So, if the message the club wants to convey is that they are holding a school event in their venue, then this is a great advertisement. But, if this is not what the advertisement was about, I do not understand all the school graduation and blackboard symbolism. Also, this is not a huge thing but somewhat distracting to me, on the silver disco ball is the tan reflection of the man's face. I would rather like no tan in the ball. Also, the man is too old for the model if this is for a high school. If for a college event, then he is ok. Hmm, the only other thing I can offer and again none of this is really huge...the advertisement is really nice, but is this more about the academic event or about the club? If it's supposed to advertise the club with a side note about this event, then that message is not made clearly. If, the event at the club is the most important concept...then you hit the nail on the coffin :) I am not the same level of ability as you, this is my humble critique you requested from me and I hope it offers some help to you.
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:iconkrestchmann:
krestchmann Featured By Owner Apr 30, 2011
buen trabajo es bueno mezclar las cosas
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:iconkevinvos:
kevinvos Featured By Owner Apr 30, 2011  Hobbyist Interface Designer
nice
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:iconxlricelx:
xlRicelx Featured By Owner Apr 30, 2011  Hobbyist Photographer
Looking awesome. :)
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:icontshan:
Tshan Featured By Owner Apr 30, 2011  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Great! ^^
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:iconuzuluna:
uzuluna Featured By Owner Apr 30, 2011  Student Filmographer
..i love how its made :D
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:iconaeonruru:
AeonRuru Featured By Owner Apr 30, 2011
Nice ^^ the model's pose n color is really awesome :D
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:iconbhaktipm:
bhaktipm Featured By Owner Apr 30, 2011
the colors are very impressive ! Great job :)
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:iconagurliced:
agurliced Featured By Owner Apr 30, 2011  Hobbyist Photographer
Nice job :)
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:iconsasihasi1:
sasihasi1 Featured By Owner Apr 30, 2011  Hobbyist
It looks good you make a perfect job like everytime!!
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:iconmetalthorn:
metalthorn Featured By Owner Apr 30, 2011
Great gob!
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:iconzhifter:
Zhifter Featured By Owner Apr 30, 2011  Student Artist
Looks amazingly cool
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