I love it! The colors you picked work very well together! I think the shade of purple is very regal and proud looking, and that the white writing on the blackboard contrasts nicely with it. The shine coming off of the disco ball (or is it mirror ball? I can't remember...) is a little distracting, but it adds 'oomph' to the page. The geometrict shapes and pale wisps of color, besides looking cool, help to encourage analyzing the entire page, not just one little corner. I also like the font of the writing- it looks proffesional and laid-back at the same time.
It's really good. The colors suggest transition to 'complete' adulthood. It emphasizes a graduation not only from school but from being young. Like "this is the event I should go to before I graduate" kind of atmosphere. The design itself speaks transition, in my point of view. However, I think that the main event/place's name (not sure what it is exactly as I don't understand it) isn't emphasized enough. Or maybe it's just the shine of the disco ball that makes it unnoticeable at first look. Overall, I think you did an excellent job Keep it up. You're one of the people that makes me proud and that makes me better, seeing amazing works push me to become more driven. Thank you
Marvelous! The colors and theme fit well together. If i were to change anything i'd do something with the blank black space to the right of the robe. It isn't the black of the blackboard, and it doesn't show the gown. I needs to be lightened a bit, or filled with something else. Every other inch of the flyer is covered, it seems to be the only void.
im going to have to agree with RedthePuppy here. the colors work amazingly well with each other adding the element of balance to the piece. the white flare behind the disco ball is a little bit to eyecatching , maybe darken it a little so its not so bright? how u set the words and fit the pieces of this together was great keep of the great work your going to go far if you pursue this
Que ondas..!!! el arte me parece bastante bueno... muy llamativo, el contraste de colores realmente es interesante y atrae... lo que más llama la atención es la bola esa que tiene el estudiante en la mano... buenisimos efectos...
Dude, your work is really amazing. I got the time, the cost, the day of the week, and the venue all in a second and the graphic is appropriate. I don't even need to speak french to understand it. The colors are good, not too many so probably a little less expensive to print? I think if I know who to call if I ever need to design packaging for a product.
If I knew how to add one of those smiley face guys next to me I would but I don't so I can't. I think
Hi Aziz, Ok I like the perspective, the colors and lighting. The message I was not sure about. Here is the message I am receiving (remembering little French language): This seems to be indicating the day and time for a school event to occur at a disco club in France. The times etc are clear. So, if the message the club wants to convey is that they are holding a school event in their venue, then this is a great advertisement. But, if this is not what the advertisement was about, I do not understand all the school graduation and blackboard symbolism. Also, this is not a huge thing but somewhat distracting to me, on the silver disco ball is the tan reflection of the man's face. I would rather like no tan in the ball. Also, the man is too old for the model if this is for a high school. If for a college event, then he is ok. Hmm, the only other thing I can offer and again none of this is really huge...the advertisement is really nice, but is this more about the academic event or about the club? If it's supposed to advertise the club with a side note about this event, then that message is not made clearly. If, the event at the club is the most important concept...then you hit the nail on the coffin I am not the same level of ability as you, this is my humble critique you requested from me and I hope it offers some help to you.